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A youth.
So young and exuberant.
Like a young tree
held up by two poles,
thinking it's strong enough
to hold the world,
but can barely stand up
on its own.
A youth.
So young and exuberant.
So young and exuberant.
Like a young tree
held up by two poles,
thinking it's strong enough
to hold the world,
but can barely stand up
on its own.
A youth.
So young and exuberant.
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This is the first of my project described here: [link]
The topic was youth, so I decided to compare that to a tree. I'm wondering, did the repeat at the end seem good to you?
I couldn't really think of an ending, so I repeated it...
Well, this is #1 and the next topic is life... Isn't it close to the same thing? Life and youth. Oh well, I'll hopefully have it up by tomorrow.
Next poem: [link]
The topic was youth, so I decided to compare that to a tree. I'm wondering, did the repeat at the end seem good to you?
I couldn't really think of an ending, so I repeated it...
Well, this is #1 and the next topic is life... Isn't it close to the same thing? Life and youth. Oh well, I'll hopefully have it up by tomorrow.
Next poem: [link]
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Great job! 